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John loved his Motorbike. He worked overtime, saved the money for more than two years and he could finally afford it. But his wife was not so happy. She didnt feel loved anymore, because John spent his free time with his Motorbike. One day she decided to sell the Motorbike, while John was at work. So she took the Bike and drove to the customer. But on the way she collided with a bus and was heavily injured. John was informed. He cried. He couldn't believe it. He ran all the way to the repair Shop and "thank god", he thought, his Bike was alright.
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