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    Can any one re-format this email

    My most recent role was at Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre(Train of hope) as a volunteer Architect, Preparing temporary shelters working with infrastructure team working closely with community groups has allowed me to develop a broad range of skills from brief gathering through coordination and liaising with other parties including the transportation, social media and medical treatment and legal advice.

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    When you say "re-format", do you mean you want us to rewrite it for you?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    I suppose you can always welcome to add or improve the main structural from what has been written. I am afraid this is what I can achieve. However . of course any comments or changing the original format would be highly appreciatable.

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    Quote Originally Posted by bartachiali View Post
    My most recent role was at Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre (space before an opening bracket) (Train of Hope) as a volunteer architect. Preparing temporary shelters, working with the infrastructure team, and working closely with community groups has allowed me to develop a broad range of skills from brief-gathering through to coordination, and liaising with other parties including the on transportation, social media, and medical treatment and legal advice.
    See above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    This is what I call it re-format, I can't find those little mistakes, but you can recognize with the blink of eyes and that is the different and I will eventually I will be able to improve my writing
    Thank you

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    #6

    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    Can you say to coordination and why?

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    It uses the "from-to" construction. Your broad range of skills ranges from XXX to YYY.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Can any one re-format this email

    Quote Originally Posted by bartachiali View Post
    This is what I call it re-format, I can't find those little mistakes, but you can recognize with the blink of eyes and that is the different and I will eventually I will be able to improve my writing
    Thank you
    The verb for that activity is to proofread.
    I am not a teacher.

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