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    IELTS Writing Task 1 - Consumption of meat and fish

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    I am about to write my IELTS exam on Saturday and I would like to receive a last feedback regarding my essays.

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    The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
    Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
    Write at least 150 words.


    The line chart depicts the consumption of distinct types of meat (beef, lamb, chicken) as well as fish in a European country in the period from 1979 to 2004.

    Overall, the most remarkable trend is the negative correlation between beef and chicken, in addition to the linear growth of the first and the fall of the latter. The amount of lamb has declined steadily and no strong different can be found in the fish consumption along the period.

    The quantity of beef used for nourishment in the researched country has reduced from 210 grams per week per person in 1979 to barely 100 gr/wk/person in 2004. On the other hand, the chicken consumption increased from 150gr/wk/person to impressive 250gr/wk/person in the same period, surpassing the amount of beef in 1989, when both indicators were about 200gr/wk/person.

    Additionally, the population has drastically reduced the ingestion of lamb. The consumption of this kind of meat decreased from 150gr/wk/person to the modicum amount of 50gr/wk/person. This narrowed the gap between lamb and fish consumption, since the indicator for fish remained approximately unchanged.
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    Re: IELTS Writing Task 1 - Consumption of meat and fish

    Quote Originally Posted by ielts-student View Post


    The line chart depicts the consumption of three distinct types of meat (beef, lamb, chicken) as well as fish in a European country in for the period from 1979 to 2004.

    Overall, the most remarkable trend is the negative inverse correlation between beef and chicken consumption, in addition to the linear growth of the first latter and the fall in consumption of the former. latter. The amount of lamb consumed has declined steadily, and no strong different can be found in while the consumption of fish consumption along remained largely steady over most of that period.

    The quantity of beef used for nourishment in the researched consumed in that country has reduced decreased from 210 grams per week per person in 1979 to barely 100 gr/wk/person in 2004. On the other hand, the chicken consumption increased from 150gr/wk/person to an impressive 250gr/wk/person in the same period, surpassing the amount of beef in 1989, when both indicators rates were about 200gr/wk/person.

    Additionally, the population has people in that country drastically reduced their consumption ingestion of lamb. The consumption of this kind of meat That decreased from 150gr/wk/person to the modicum modest amount of 50gr/wk/person. This narrowed the gap between lamb and fish consumption, since the indicator line for fish remained approximately mostly unchanged.
    Note:
    1- Since 2004 is not recent, use the past simple, not the present perfect.
    2- Use grams per person per week, not grams per week per person.

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