[Essay] The mouse

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Tarheel

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A "sigil" is an inscribed or painted symbol considered to have magical power.
 

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First we should straighten up the room. Your medicine books all over the place will frustrate our attempts to catch the mouse.
 

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Are they all of my mistakes dear @Tarheel?
 

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Secondly, I recommend that you find two things to kill that filthy animal with.
 

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Perhaps:

I didn't want to use a hammer. (What if I missed? I would put a dent in the floor.)
 

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Damn! There is no way in hell that filthy little thing is going to get away.
 

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The mouse ran under the sofa. I turned the sofa over, and it ran out from underneath the sofa and headed for the next room. Suddenly the mouse stopped and fell over dead. Yes! My uncle had hit it with a projectile from his air gun and sent it to the hereafter.

Finished!
 
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