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    Attention to detail

    Hi,

    Is it "with an attention to detail" or "with attention to detail"?

    Thanks in advance.

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    Re: Attention to detail

    Please provide some context. At least a full sentence.
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

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    Re: Attention to detail

    Thanks for your reaction.

    In example:

    "With an attention to detail and mastery of taste, Coca Cola can craft a tasting experience that brings out the best in you"

    or

    "With an attention to detail he makes beautiful pictures for his online blog"

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    Re: Attention to detail

    I don't find either of those sentences natural with or without "an", I'm afraid
    “Every miserable fool who has nothing at all of which he can be proud, adopts as a last resource pride in the nation to which he belongs; he is ready and happy to defend all its faults and follies tooth and nail, thus reimbursing himself for his own inferiority.”

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    Re: Attention to detail

    Okay, that's a pity.

    Lets try it one more time.

    "With an attention to detail and mastery of fabric, Budget-Suit can craft a personal wardrobe to bring out the best in you."

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    #6

    Re: Attention to detail

    How about With their/its attention to detail...?

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    #7

    Re: Attention to detail

    "With an attention to detail" sounds OK to me.

    With an attention to detail, our master brewers create a beer that will refresh and delight.

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    #8

    Re: Attention to detail

    I wouldn't use "an" there at all.

    With attention to detail, ...
    With their attention to detail, ...
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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