[Grammar] Attention to detail

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Blabla123

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Hi,

Is it "with an attention to detail" or "with attention to detail"?

Thanks in advance.
 

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Please provide some context. At least a full sentence.
 

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Thanks for your reaction.

In example:

"With an attention to detail and mastery of taste, Coca Cola can craft a tasting experience that brings out the best in you"

or

"With an attention to detail he makes beautiful pictures for his online blog"
 

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I don't find either of those sentences natural with or without "an", I'm afraid
 

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Okay, that's a pity.

Lets try it one more time.

"With an attention to detail and mastery of fabric, Budget-Suit can craft a personal wardrobe to bring out the best in you."
 

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How about With their/its attention to detail...?
 

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"With an attention to detail" sounds OK to me.

With an attention to detail, our master brewers create a beer that will refresh and delight.
 

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I wouldn't use "an" there at all.

With attention to detail, ...
With their attention to detail, ...
 
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