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    How to improve this letter?


    How can I improve the following letter:

    This has reference to the Door Mat stock we require for Delhi sales. At present, we have no stock of Door Mat # 12 and # 24 , while the other two numbers (Door Mat # 16 & # 18) are also not sufficient for this month sales.

    Thanks in advance.



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    Re: How to improve this letter?

    This is a duplicate thread.

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