I need help with my CV

[xao1]

This is my first post on this forum, and I'd like to say Hello to everyone!

Could someone check that for me ?? PLEASE
Below is a part of it:


08.2011 – 09.2011 Apprenticeship – FA – Ad Zaus (Poland)
Support milling and turning machines.


04.2013 – 08.2013 Design Engineer(maintenance)– Ar sp. z o.o (Poland)
Design and develop parts in order to achieve performance, creation of 3D CAD models, operating and programing CNC machinery. Montage of production lines.


12.2013 – 07.2014 Technician/CAD operator/Supervisor – Foods NV-SA (Belgium)
Maintenance of machines, fault rectification, taking care of continuity in production. Redesigned existing part. Design and development new machines for production line. Created CAD, detail, technical and assembly drawings. Self- assembly of designed devices.


08.2014 – present Design engineer – Design Ltd (United Kingdom)
Design and develop side steps, metal brackets, tanks, moulded parts, trims, plastic covers, moulds. Redesign all existing rams with the use composite. Planing and developing technological process of composite boards. Programming and setting up 5 Axis CNC machine: composite boards, moulds, prototypes, patterns for aluminium casting. Cost reduction and improvement of quality. Prototyping. Bills of materials.

 

[teechar]

What is "FA-AD?"
What do you mean by "supporting milling and turning machines?"
What does "Ar sp. z o.o" mean?
What do you mean by "Design and develop parts in order to achieve performance, creation ... etc.?"
What does "NV-SA" mean?
Is "Design Ltd" the name of some company?
What does "all existing rams with the use composite" mean?

 

[xao1]

1) It's the name of a company.
2) In the second I'd like to say that I was preparing and setting up milling and turning machines.
3) The same as 1
4) It means that I designed and developed parts to customers requirements.
5) The same as 1
6) Yes, it is the name of a company
all existing ramps* with the use composites - I redesigned ramps for the vehicles. I used composite boards to do that.

What is "FA-AD?"
What do you mean by "supporting milling and turning machines?"
What does "Ar sp. z o.o" mean?
What do you mean by "Design and develop parts in order to achieve performance, creation ... etc.?"
What does "NV-SA" mean?
Is "Design Ltd" the name of some company?
What does "all existing rams with the use composite" mean?

 

[xao1]

If you give me you email address then I can send you the whole CV
;-)

 

[teechar]

1) It's the name of a company.

OK.

2) In the second I'd like to say that I was preparing and setting up milling and turning machines.

Then say that.

3) The same as 1

OK.

4) It means that I designed and developed parts to customer requirements.

Say that.

5) The same as 1

OK.

6) Yes, it is the name of a company
all existing ramps with the use composites - I redesigned ramps for the vehicles. I used composite boards to do that.

Say that.

If you give me your email address, then I can send you the whole CV.

I don't do that, I'm afraid.

 

[emsr2d2]

If you give me you email address then I can send you the whole CV
;-)

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