I really like my job

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robin lee

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Are these sentences right?

I really like my job and I have been working in XX Company for only one year. I would assess my job performance over the past one year as good on the following reasons: I was sick on only three occasions over the past year. I always finished all work projects and managed to meet all the deadlines. I have had a good working relationship with all my colleagues. I demonstrated the following strengths during this one year: positive, hard working and motivated.
 

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Re: any grammar errors

[STRIKE]I really like my job and [/STRIKE]I have been working in XX Company for only one year and I really like my job. I would [STRIKE]assess [/STRIKE] rate my job performance over the past one year as good, based on the following reasons: I was sick on only three occasions over the past year. I always finished all work projects and managed to meet all the deadlines. I have had a good working relationship with all my colleagues. I demonstrated the following strengths during this one year: being positive, hard working and motivated.
 

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[STRIKE]I really like my job and[/STRIKE] I have been working in XX Company for [STRIKE]only[/STRIKE] one year, and I really like my job. I would assess my job performance over the past one year as being good [STRIKE]on[/STRIKE] for the following reasons:
- I was sick on only three occasions over the past year.
- I always finished all work projects and managed to meet all the deadlines.
- I have [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] a good working relationship with all my colleagues.
- I demonstrated the following strengths during [STRIKE]this one[/STRIKE] the past year: positive outlook, hard work [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] and motivation. [STRIKE]ed.[/STRIKE]

If the name of the company is "XX Company", then call it that. Otherwise, just use XX.
 

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Robin lee, note that I have changed your thread title. Titles should include some/all of the words/phrases you are querying.
 
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