Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you take a look at the following sentences and correct my mistakes?
The beach was crowded. Bodies of all ages, sizes and shapes lay lazily under the scorching sun, glistening with sweat and sun cream.
The beach was crowded. Bodies of all ages, sizes and shapes lay lazily under the scorching sun, glistening with sweat and sun cream.