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Would you please correct my mistakes in the following sentences?
John felt he had to get rid of the things that cluttered his life. Alcohol, women, gambling and overwork were strangling him and did not allow him to breathe.
Last edited by Bassim; 15-Mar-2016 at 10:04.
I would use the continuous in the first part, and I would add "up".
John felt he had to get rid of the things that were cluttering up his life.
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