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    Writing about your daily routine

    Hi you guys,

    I have an essay about writing about your daily routine. I'd like to know your feedback along with possible grammatical errors and other mistakes. Please help me out. Thanks!

    Everyday, I get up at 5.45 am in the morning. I brush my teeth, wash my face and get dressed. It takes me about 15 minutes to get ready. I then have a light breakfast at 6.00 am and prepare to go to school. Then, I leave home and go to school at 6.20 am.

    I usually go to school by bike. Sometimes I go to school on foot, as my school is not that far. It usually takes 5-10 minutes to go by bike and about 15-20 minutes to walk to school. I go together with my close friend, Daisy and often some other friends. We either start chatting or going over the school material after we reach school, and classes start at 7.15 am. We have four periods per day, about 50 minutes each period and 10 minutes relax time between periods. We go home as classes finish at 11.15 am.

    I have lunch with my family at 12.00 am. At noon, I usually have nothing to do after lunch. I then begin taking a nap to prepare for a fresh and lively afternoon. I like sports and I often participate in playing games and sports in the afternoon. Every afternoon, I am usually together with my close neighborhood, Daisy. We fly our kites, play badminton and even play dodgeball when we have more players. Sometimes, we just wander around or go to the park to kill time. Our afternoon ends at 5.00 pm and I have to return home to help my family with cooking and other work. After a day full of activities I often take a shower at 5.15 am and then help my mother with her dinner. We have dinner at 6.00 pm and watch television together. After dinner, I help my family by cleaning up the food and washing the dishes. I often have to do my homework till 8.00 pm and sometimes when I've got no homework, I play computer games. My hobbies in the evening are reading comics, watching cartoons, chatting and playing video games. Finally, I turn in at 9.00 pm and sleep with my little sister.
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    Re: Writing about your daily routine

    Quote Originally Posted by megafunc View Post
    Everyday, I get up at 5.45 am in the morning.
    Use "am" or "in the morning", but not both!

    Quote Originally Posted by megafunc View Post
    I brush my teeth, wash my face and get dressed. It takes me about 15 minutes to get ready. I then have a light breakfast at 6.00 am and prepare to go to school. Then, I leave home and go to school at 6.20 am.
    Instead of repeating "then", use "afterwards" or "After that."

    Quote Originally Posted by megafunc View Post
    I usually go to school by bike, but sometimes I go walk to school on foot, as my school is not that far. It usually takes 5-10 minutes to go by bike and or about 15-20 minutes on foot. to walk to school. I go together with my close friend, Daisy, and often with some other friends too. When we get to the school, we either start chat about different things ting or go ing over our homework. the school material after we reach school, and Classes start at 7.15 am. We have four periods per day, about 50 minutes each, period and we get 10-minute-breaks relax time between periods. We then go home for lunch as when classes finish at 11.15 am.

    I have lunch with my family at 12.00 am. At noon, I usually have nothing to do after lunch, so I then begin taking take a nap to prepare for a fresh and lively afternoon. I like sports, and I often participate in playing games and sports in the afternoon. Every afternoon, I am usually together with my close neighborhood, Daisy. We fly our kites, play badminton and even play dodgeball when we have more players. Sometimes, we just wander around or go to the park to kill time. Our afternoon ends At 5.00 pm, and I have to return home to help my family with cooking and other work. After a day full of activities, I often take a shower at 5.15 am and then help my mother with her prepare dinner. We have dinner at 6.00 pm, after which I help with the washing up. and watch television together. After dinner, I help my family by cleaning up the food and washing the dishes. I often have to After that, I do my homework which usually takes a couple of hours, but till 8.00 pm and sometimes when I've got no homework, I play computer games. My hobbies in the evening are reading comics, watching cartoons, chatting and playing video games. Finally, I turn in at 9.00 pm and sleep with my little sister.

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    #3

    Re: Writing about your daily routine

    When are you going to submit your essay to your teacher/tutor?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Writing about your daily routine

    Thank you very much!

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    Re: Writing about your daily routine

    Just a side comment: 12 am is midnight. 12 pm is noon.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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