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    Smile There is a moment in my life

    Hello, I'm writing an essay about my qualifications and life experiences. I have a doubt, is this sentence OK?

    "There is a moment in my life that stands out in my mind that I think has gotten my bearings to the path Iím following right now."

    Thank you!

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    Re: There is a moment in my life

    Quote Originally Posted by ZoaH View Post
    Hello, I'm writing an essay about my qualifications and life experiences. I have a doubt query about the following sentence. Is this sentence OK?

    "There is a moment in my life that stands out in my mind that I think has gotten my bearings to the path Iím following right now."

    Thank you!
    Welcome to the forum.

    Note my changes to your thread title and to your opening. Thread titles should include some/all of the words/phrases you are querying. Don't forget we don't use an upside-down question mark in written English.

    I'm not sure I know exactly what you are trying to say but I think it might be something like this:

    There is one particularly important moment in my life which I believe led me to the path I'm following now.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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