Thank you. I got my response. Please delete thread.
Last edited by FortOtt; 21-Mar-2016 at 03:07.
Since you mention Baltimore and New York after Fort Lauderdale, I think it's appropriate to repeat the name of the city the school is in.
The capitalization of Cardinal/cardinal makes no sense, as you asked in your other question. This leads me to believe you copied that sentence from another source.
26-acre - don't try to spell out numbers great than ten.
You need to better understand plagiarism.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.