kenziekorin
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Hello,
I need help diagramming the following sentence (both RK and Tree):
"And the peopleunder the sky were also very much the same - everywhere, all over the world, hundreds of thousands of millions of people just like this, people ignorant of one another's existence, held apart by walls of hatred and lies, and yet almost exactly the same - people who had never learned to think but who were storing up in their hearts and bellies and muscles the power that would one day overturn the world."
I am told there are "major" appositives in this sentence, but I can't seem to pick them out. I am blaming it on the fact that I have been staring at it for far to long, but that may be just to make myself feel better ;-).
If you can only diagram one way, I would rather the RK diagram.
Any help would be greatly appreciated!!!
Thank you so much,
Kenzie
I need help diagramming the following sentence (both RK and Tree):
"And the peopleunder the sky were also very much the same - everywhere, all over the world, hundreds of thousands of millions of people just like this, people ignorant of one another's existence, held apart by walls of hatred and lies, and yet almost exactly the same - people who had never learned to think but who were storing up in their hearts and bellies and muscles the power that would one day overturn the world."
I am told there are "major" appositives in this sentence, but I can't seem to pick them out. I am blaming it on the fact that I have been staring at it for far to long, but that may be just to make myself feel better ;-).
If you can only diagram one way, I would rather the RK diagram.
Any help would be greatly appreciated!!!
Thank you so much,
Kenzie
