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    a paragraph to mark

    Hi guys! I wrote a paragraph for myself. Can anyone check it out ? I will be grateful.


    The price of a cup of coffee contains a couple of constituents.

    These days drinking coffee has become an important part of daily life without people could not imagine a day. Few of gourmets are aware of the ingredients which have a slightly impact on the price of a cup of coffee, which generally is not cheap. The article “Move over Starbucks” has been published in New York Times, 29 November 2003 written by Day, Sherri has emerged factors of the cost of a Double Cappuccino at Speciality Coffee Shops. The cost of an exemplary cup of coffee described in the article totals $ 3,75. Shop rent, marketing, general administration and labour costs are the majority part of the valuation estimates approximately 60 percent and those have a significant influence on how much money people must pay at the speciality coffee shops. The least dimension is coffee growers who possesses the supreme impact on the quality of coffee beans through how they care of beans. It might be considered as a peculiar datum, owing to the satisfaction of customers in large part depends on breeders. The focal point is awakening by customers that money which they pay at the cash register is not merely for a beverage but variants elements which are contained as well.

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    Re: a paragraph to mark

    The price of a cup of coffee contains a couple of constituents. The constituents that make up the price of a cup of coffee

    These days drinking coffee has become an important part of daily life, without people could not imagine a day which many people cannot do without. Few coffee of gourmets connoisseurs are aware ofthat the ingredients only which have a slightly impact on the price of a cup of coffee, which generally is not cheap. The article “Move over Starbucks” has been published in New York Times, 29 November 2003, and written by Day Sherri, has emerged stated the factors of that contribute to the cost of a double cappuccino at speciality coffee shops. The cost of an exemplary cup of coffee described in the article totals $ 3,75. Shop rental, marketing, general administration and labour costs are the majority part of the valuation cost which constitutes approximately 60 percent and those they have a significant influence on how much money people must pay at the speciality coffee shops. The least significant dimension is that of the coffee growers who possesses the supreme have the greatest impact on the quality of coffee beans through how they take care of the beans. It might be considered as a peculiar datum, owing to since the satisfaction of customers in large part largely depends on the growers breeders. The focal salient point is the awakening by on the customers that the money which they pay at the cash registers is not merely just for a the beverage, which is actually less significant, but for the variants various other elements which are contained as well components in the delivery process of the beverage which seem unrelated but are in fact much more significant.
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    Re: a paragraph to mark

    Quote Originally Posted by bartdebsky View Post
    These days drinking coffee has become an important essential part of daily life without for many people. could not imagine a day. However, few of gourmets coffee drinkers are aware of the ingredients which have a slightly impact on real factors which determine the price of a cup of coffee, which generally is not cheap. The article “Move over Starbucks” has been published in New York Times, 29 November 2003 written by Sherrie Day, Sherri has emerged outlines the factors of influencing the cost of a double cappuccino at specialty coffee shops. The cost of an exemplary a typical cup of coffee described in the article totals is $3,75. Shop rent, marketing, general administration and labour costs are the majority part of the valuation estimates account for approximately 60% of the total cost, percent and those have a significant influence on how much money people must pay at those specialty coffee shops. The least dimension significant cost is the money paid to the actual coffee growers who ironically are the ones possesses the supreme who have the most direct impact on the quality of coffee beans through how they grow and care for of the beans. It might be considered as a peculiar datum, owing to the satisfaction of customers in large part depends on breeders. The focal central theme of the article is point is awakening the increased awareness by customers that money which they pay at the cash register is not merely for a beverage but involves a deeper socioeconomic chain. variants elements which are contained as well.
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    Re: a paragraph to mark

    These days, ​drinking coffee ...
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