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    #1

    the company connects/brings together? the currier and the customer

    A company develops applications for mobile phones. These appications are used both by curriers and customers of online shops for more effective delivering/getting parcels. Can I say
    1) The company's main business line is bringing together the courrier of an online shop and the customer.
    2) The company's main business line is connecting the courrier of an online shop and the customer.
    3) The company's main business line is helping the courrier of an online shop and the customer to interract.


    Or is there a better way to put it?
    Last edited by englishhobby; 11-Apr-2016 at 21:53.
    If I were a native speaker of English, I would never shut up. :-)

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    #2

    Re: the company connects/brings together? the currier and the customer

    Change 'currier' to 'courier' and add the missing full stops (periods) and #1 and #2 sound OK to me.

    I don't like #3 much.

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    #3

    Re: the company connects/brings together? the currier and the customer

    Maybe the business sells curry.

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