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    Explores the early relationship

    Hi is this sentence well-writen?

    1. Explores the early relationship between the renowned psychiatrist and his patient, a young FBI criminal profiler, who is haunted by his ability to empathize with serial killers.

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    Re: Explores the early relationship

    It is not a complete sentence. The story explores...?
    It should be "a" before "psychiatrist". I am not sure about the use of the word "haunted".
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Explores the early relationship

    Haunted is okay.
    I agree that "a" is correct rather than "the" and that it needs a subject.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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