.People have different views about how leisure time should be spent.
used in a proper way.While some point out there are benefits for those who prefer relaxing the mind, others highlight the advantages of activities that stimulate their thinking. enhance the brain are highly justifiable.
On the one hand, people spending time on
intelligentactivities such as reading books or solving word puzzles appear to have opportunitiesto become more happy and successful in life. In fact, reading books allows people to escape into a different world (which) eases the tensions in the rest of the body. Also, reading helps people expand their knowledge onin fields that they really love. Likewise, playingsolving puzzles notis not only serves the purpose of derivingfun, but also keeps the brain active and sharp at any age. By doing such activities, people will certainly develop their intellectual capacities through reasoning, thinking and stimulating their imagination. This can turn out to be fruitful in the future.
On the other hand, many people would rather enjoy mindless activities in their free time. Firstly, after
getting off froma stressful day at work, with a mind was full of stress and thoughts, some people tend to involveengage in activities that can help them refresh their minds and get back(->recharge) their energy Meanwhile, playinginstead of doing puzzles or reading books means thatfor which they have to focus and keep their brains working. This(->such activities----I don't know why I cannot use "this"?) could increase the fatigue they have suffered (from-> Does it really need "from"?).In addition, one might argue that exercise or some outdoor recreational pursuits such as mountain climbing or swimming isare very interesting and restful. Also, these activities help people relieve stress and keep themhealthy.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against using leisure time to improve the mind, but the benefits still outweigh the drawbacks. Devoting time to such activities seems to be a more
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