Fabiotek
Member
- Joined
- Apr 17, 2016
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Italian
- Home Country
- Italy
- Current Location
- Turkey
Hello Admin/s, Moderator/s and forum members!
We run zero-revenue, commercial-free radio stations, supporting many new/young music composers, airing their works.
We have ready for reading a couple of scripts, but as English is not our mother tongue, we are a little bit concerned that scripts contain grammar or express the concept not in a proper way for English speaking people... We wouldn't be very proud to have listeners laughing or pulling up eyebrows while listening at us! :-(
May I ask you your opinion regarding the below two sentences, before we read them "live?
Thank you, it is much appreciated!
Best regards,
Fabio
1) Do you want to listen to your favorite radio station anytime anywhere? Our "MRG.fm Radio" App is available for Android, iPhone and Tablets. Visit [hyperlink removed] and download it for free.
2) We hope you are enjoying the music we handpick for you. Please remember that we can keep being on the air, playing commercial free music -Only- if supported by your donations. Thank you.
We run zero-revenue, commercial-free radio stations, supporting many new/young music composers, airing their works.
We have ready for reading a couple of scripts, but as English is not our mother tongue, we are a little bit concerned that scripts contain grammar or express the concept not in a proper way for English speaking people... We wouldn't be very proud to have listeners laughing or pulling up eyebrows while listening at us! :-(
May I ask you your opinion regarding the below two sentences, before we read them "live?
Thank you, it is much appreciated!
Best regards,
Fabio
1) Do you want to listen to your favorite radio station anytime anywhere? Our "MRG.fm Radio" App is available for Android, iPhone and Tablets. Visit [hyperlink removed] and download it for free.
2) We hope you are enjoying the music we handpick for you. Please remember that we can keep being on the air, playing commercial free music -Only- if supported by your donations. Thank you.
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