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    A random topic for an essay please

    I want to write a paragraph or short essay at any topic (Being easy for a beginner :p). So suggest me one, I would expect someone to evaluate my writing afterwards.
    I have seen similar writings being evaluated by Moderator: emsr2d2 (RESPECT).


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    Re: A random topic for an essay please

    Quote Originally Posted by Azmat View Post
    I want to write a paragraph or short essay at on any topic (Being it needs to be easy for a beginner). :p). So Please suggest me one. I would expect like someone to evaluate my writing afterwards.
    I have seen similar writings being evaluated by a moderator (emsr2d2). (RESPECT)
    Welcome to the forum.

    First please look at my corrections above.

    I don't want to make a habit of this but I will come up with one more essay title for you. Remember that any member can evaluate the writing afterwards. Also, please don't make the essay too long - perhaps three or four paragraphs at the most.

    Your title is: "Do you want to live to be 100 years old? Why (or why not)?"
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: A random topic for an essay please

    Everyone needs to enjoy a life in good spirits. Sadly, our lives are too filled with responsibilities to fulfill. Only in old age, does a person get a chance to make best out of his remaining life. I want to live to hundred years to enjoy a life filled with endless joys.

    Family, among other things, is the most satisfying source of pleasure. Children, sons-in-law, daughters-in-law and most importantly grandchildren, are a great source of satisfaction. A life devoid of mundane responsibilities can best be enjoyed in the company of family.

    Although ailing health will not allow much social activity, I would love to rejuvenate my life with family dinners and playing veteran sports, probably with a few good remaining friends. Medicines and illness will be an inevitable part of life, but I will not be a hostage to them instead I will be a hostage of my endless joys.

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    #4

    Re: A random topic for an essay please

    There are thousands of topics here: http://www.esldiscussions.com/index.html

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    #5

    Re: A random topic for an essay please

    Not a teacher

    Just Google it and you'll find exactly what you need :)
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 21-Apr-2016 at 19:58. Reason: Added "Not a teacher"

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    Living to Be 100

    Having responsibility isn't sad. What's sad is not having any responsibility.

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    Only in old age does a person get a chance to enjoy what remains of his/her life.

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    Re: Living to Be 100

    It's not until you're 90 that you get a chance to enjoy life? Until then you're miserable?

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    Re: Living to Be 100

    Say:

    I want to live to be 100 and live a life filled with endless joy.

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    Re: Living to Be 100

    If you are going to say something is the most of something don't add "among other things" to it. Only one thing can be the most of something.

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    Re: Living to Be 100

    Perhaps you mean to say:

    declining health

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