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    History never repeats itself, WE repeat history

    Dear Sir/Ma'am,

    I made a short paragraphs which you can find below. I will appreciate if you can edit on it.

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    “History never repeats itself, WE repeat history”.

    Had watched over half of the Sakay film depicting the life of the Filipino patriot: an instantaneous insight comes in my mind. Since time immemorial, disunity and discord had always been displayed among Filipinos. It’s an unfortunate reality that majority had sided the foreign tyranny offering gold and heaven than their countrymen who fought for freedom and for preservation of sovereignty. It’s seemed the so called heroes’ bravery and legacy had forgotten . Philippines has no glorious past. Its archipelagic location seems an epitome of division and disharmony among Filipinos.

    Hence, it’s unsurprising that cheating and vote buying in every election has become prevalent because history speaks on it: the Tejeros Convention in 1897 where first election in the Philippine history was held had been tainted with fraud and quackery.

    It’s easier said than done. What’s lacking on us is the “love” of our country. IF AND ONLY IF, everyone has love and concern of the country in its truest meaning from the very beginning (like our neighboring ASEAN countries wholeheartedly did notably Japan), then economic freedom has long been attained.

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    Re: History never repeats itself, WE repeat history

    Quote Originally Posted by Eugene Imfiel View Post

    I made wrote a short paragraphs passage which you can find below. I will would appreciate if you someone can edit on it.

    Thanks and best regards,


    __________________________________________________ ___________________________

    “History never repeats itself; we repeat history”.

    Had I watched over half of the Sakay - a film depicting the life of the Filipino patriot and was inspired by it. : an instantaneous insight comes in my mind. Since time immemorial, disunity and discord had always been displayed the norm among Filipinos. It’s an unfortunate reality that majority had sided with the foreign tyranny offering gold and heaven rather than with their countrymen who fought for freedom and for preservation of the sovereignty of their country. It ’s seems ed the so-called heroes’ bravery and legacy had been forgotten. The Philippines has no glorious past. Its archipelagic location seems an epitome of geography seems to epitomize the division and disharmony among Filipinos.

    Hence, it’s unsurprising that cheating and vote buying in every election has become prevalent because as history attests. speaks on it: The Tejeros Convention in 1897 where the first election in the Philippine's history was held had been was tainted with fraud and quackery.

    It’s easier said than done, but what’s lacking on in us is the “love” of for our country. IF AND ONLY IF, If and only if everyone has genuine love and concern of for the country in its truest meaning from the very beginning ( like our neighboring ASEAN countries wholeheartedly love their countries, did notably Japan), then the Philippines will prosper as a country and our economy will thrive. economic freedom has long been attained.
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