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    Smile A letter to a friend

    Hello. I have some doubts whether my letter is correct. In this letter I want to ask my friend about a man with whom he has introduced me to at his party. Please help me to find possible mistakes.

    Hello,
    I have already missed you since our last meeting.
    I was glad to get your letter. It was great to hear that you passed your history test successfully.
    Recently I've remembered your party what was last month. You know that guy you introduced me to at your party? I thought he was attractive. I think his name was Pete, but I'm not sure in it. What's his story?
    By the way, an interesting accident happened at the party, of which you hardly knew. I learned it yesterday from Nick.
    When a some guy was eating snacks, he choked on one of them. Near there was Nick. Well he gave him appropriate and timely help. In fact, the poor victim couldn't breathe! Can you imagine? I'm wondering whether he is a doctor.
    So, I would like to know him better. Could you give me his contacts if it would be possible? Anyway, I'll be happy even if you tell him about my interest in communication with him.
    How are you getting on? Is everything OK? How is your dog, does it feel well after its operation?
    I’d better go now as I’ve got to do my homework assignment — boring things!
    Hope to hear from you soon.
    All the best,
    Irina


    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 23-Apr-2016 at 21:35. Reason: Removed formatting to make font readable

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    Re: A letter to a friend

    Quote Originally Posted by Ira1717 View Post
    Hello. I have some doubts whether my letter is correct. In this letter I want to ask my friend about a man with to whom he has introduced me to at his party. Please help me to find possible any mistakes.

    Hello,
    I have already missed you since our last meeting.
    I was glad to get your letter. It was great to hear that you passed your history test successfully.
    Recently I've I remembered your party what was last month. You know that guy you introduced me to at your party? I thought he was attractive. I think his name was Pete, but I'm not sure. in it. What's his story?
    By the way, an something interesting accident happened at the party of which you hardly knew. but I don't think you know about it. I learned of it yesterday from Nick.
    When A some guy who was eating snacks (no comma here) he choked on one of them. Near there was Nick was nearby . Well he and gave him appropriate and timely help. In fact, the poor victim couldn't breathe! Can you imagine? I'm wondering whether if he Nick is a doctor.
    So, I would like to know him Nick better. Could you give me his contacts contact details? if it would be possible? Anyway In fact, I'll I'd be happy even if you tell told him about my interest in communication communicating with him.
    How are you getting on? Is everything OK? How is your dog? Does it feel well after its operation?
    Id better go now as Ive got to do my homework assignment boring! things!
    Hope to hear from you soon.
    All the best,
    Irina


    Thanks in advance.
    See my suggested amendments above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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