[Grammar] Grammar in sentence

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iam258

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Hello, can somebody check this sentence? I am not sure if it is correct. Thanks :)

Obviously, salary from part-time job isn´t high enough for funding their whole life but it´s great method how to learn new things and help your parents financially.
 

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Hello, can somebody check this sentence? I am not sure if it is correct. Thanks. [strike]:)[/strike] Don't try to make your own emoticons. Click on the :) button and choose the appropriate one.

Obviously, the salary from a part-time job isn´t high enough [STRIKE]for funding[/STRIKE] to fund their whole life but it´s a great [STRIKE]method[/STRIKE] way [STRIKE]how[/STRIKE] to learn new things and to help your parents financially.

See my corrections above.

I don't see how the salary from a part-time job can help you learn new things.
 

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I don't see how the salary from a part-time job can help you learn new things.

I have never learnt anything from a full-time salary either, if it comes to that :lol:.
 

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Emsr2d2's corrections are right. Also, put a comma before "but." It's a compound sentence.
 
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