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  1. Just Joined
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      • Native Language:
      • Dutch
      • Home Country:
      • Netherlands
      • Current Location:
      • Curacao

    • Join Date: Apr 2016
    • Posts: 1
    #1

    Please correct my cover letter. Thank you so much.

    Although I am aware that my application might come in too late, I really would love to apply for the position of Operations Assistant at your company as posted in the Amigoe newspaper.

    Before I came to Curacao I have had several demanding administrative, secretarial and purchasing jobs. These have always included deadlines and high pressure. This has been something I have really been missing as I thrive under pressure. I really would love to get back into real business again.

    Although I don’t have any technical experience I found that it’s never too late to learn. In the past I have learned about Automotives and Steel constructions. Subsea Global Solutions looks like the perfect place for me to work for as I really enjoy being surrounded by people from different regions of the world.
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  2. Tarheel's Avatar
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      • Native Language:
      • American English
      • Home Country:
      • United States
      • Current Location:
      • United States

    • Join Date: Jun 2014
    • Posts: 11,007
    #2

    Re: Please correct my cover letter. Thank you so much.

    Say:

    Before I came to Curacao, I had several....

    And:

    This is something I have really been missing, as I thrive under pressure.

    And:

    Although I don't have any technical experience, I have found that it's never too late to learn.

    By "automotives" do you mean automobile manufacture?

    Capitalize only proper nouns.

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