Don't put spaces before question marks.
Don't use "etc."
Check your spelling.
Use apostrophes for possessive nouns (like other's).
Break up some of the long sentences into shorter sentences.
Put commas in compound sentences.
Capitalize proper nouns (like Inuits).
We only ride through mountains if there's a tunnel to ride through. Otherwise, we ride up, down, or over mountains.
Other side is two words.
Look up auction.
I hope that helps!
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