You're welcome!Hi my name is David. Thanks.
A website has asked readers to submit reviews of tourist destinations that they have visited.
The review should discuss both positive and negative aspects of the destination and should also suggest ways in which it could be made more attractive to tourists.
The apartment I'm reviewing was not only placed in the best part of the city but also close
to the beach. There were young people, most of them tourists, so if you want to improve your
English skills, you should give it a try.
Its address was "Cinema Street Number 2", [In American English, the comma would go before the quotation mark.] I remember it quite well because I thought we
would have a cinema nearby. Anyway, as I was saying, as soon as we got to Valencia we found
the flat, easy peasy! It had two pretty nice bedrooms, one bathroom, and a medium-size living room
which shared space with the kitchen. It was like a typical American kitchen, where you could
pass the dishes to the living room by a huge window. It had, as well, a gorgeous balcony where
you could see a stunning landscape of the sea.
A few minutes after we arrived, the neighbor rang on the door offering us a piece of cake, as it
was his nephew's birthday. We got along quite well. Everything seemed to be perfect till the
night came. By the time we were going to sleep we realized our beds were broken apart,
both of them, ergo, refusing to sleep on the couch, we ended up having some beers at the
main square. I must say, that night was one of my best nights ever! The atmosphere was
super and the people was very nice.
To conclude, If you ask me if I would go back, maybe I'd answer yes. But I wouldn't
recommend the apartment to anyone, although I had a great time. [no space before the period] My advice to the landlord
would be to repair the apartment's furniture, as well as the lift, though we didn't use it. I'm
glad I decided to go, but next time I'd rather go to the mountains than go to the beach.
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