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    PLease check my sentence

    Asian hotel is not giving upfront interest for new icd borrowing.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 27-Apr-2016 at 12:59. Reason: See below.

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    Re: PLease check my sentence

    It's meaningless to me, maybe because I have no idea what 'icd' is.
    In any case, "Asian hotel" is wrong. If it's called "Asian Hotel", you need that. Otherwise, it's "The Asian hotel" or "An Asian hotel".

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    Re: PLease check my sentence

    Welcome to the forum, anand.saraf333.

    I have deleted 'Dear Sir' from your post. No salutation is necessary, and it is disrespectful to our female members.

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    Re: PLease check my sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by anand.saraf333 View Post
    The Asian hotel is not giving upfront interest for new ICD borrowing.
    But I must say, the sentence doesn't make sense to me. Why would a hotel be making loans at all? And what is ICD borrowing?
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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