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  1. Narkises's Avatar
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    #1

    Cool therapeutic plans

    Hello
    Is it right? "Analysis psychotherapies are less obvious,which makes difficulty in making efficiency research plans"

    I translated it from Persian to English . I don't like it because of 2 "making"
    Could you please change it to the best way??
    Tnx

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    Re: therapeutic plans

    Try this: Analysis psychotherapies are less obvious, which makes it difficult to plan research efficiently.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: therapeutic plans

    Quote Originally Posted by Narkses View Post
    Hello.
    Is it the following sentence right?

    "Analysis psychotherapies are less obvious, (put a space after a comma) which makes difficulty in making efficiency research plans."

    I translated it from Persian to English. (Don't put a space before a full stop.) I don't like it because of there are 2 forms of "making make".

    Could you please change it to the best way improve it? ??
    Tnx Thanks.
    Note my corrections above. It's important to follow these rules of written English at all times:

    - Start every sentence with a capital letter.
    - End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
    - Always capitalise the word "I".
    - Do not put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.
    - Always put a space after a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark.

    Please use full, standard words on this forum. "Tnx" does not exist. The word is "Thanks".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #4

    Re: therapeutic plans

    Hello emsr2d2,
    I appreciate you because you corrected my letter. I do my best so that I won't do those mistakes again. Just one more thing, I really don't know where I should use these three
    punctuations: ; , -
    Thank you

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