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    Please help check the possible version for students' composition.

    Hello, there. My students were asked to make a presentation for the discussion topic "My ways of learning English" in class. And finally, I want to give them a possible version. Will someone, who is kind enough, check it and make some corrections and improvements? I really appreciate your help. The possible version goes as follows:
    We have our own experiences of learning English. At the age of ten, I began to learn English. But at the beginning, my English is not very good so I was afraid of speaking it. One day my English teacher asked me to make a duty report in class. I was worried but I tried my best. In the end, my report surprised all my classmates and it encouraged me a lot. Since then I become more and more interested in English and try to practice it as much as possible.
    I hope if possible, my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us. I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class.

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    Re: Please help check the possible version for students' composition.

    Quote Originally Posted by rodgers white View Post
    We all have our own experiences of learning English. At the age of ten, I began to learn English. But at the beginning, my English is was not very good, so I was afraid of speaking it. One day my English teacher asked me to make a duty report in class. I was worried, but I tried my best. In the end, my report surprised all my classmates, and it encouraged me a lot. Since then, I have become more and more interested in English, and I try to practice it as much as possible.

    I hope if possible, my English teacher can hold organize some English parties and an English corner for us. I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class.
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    Re: Please help check the possible version for students' composition.

    Much apprecitated for your help!Teechar.

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