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    would u help me to correct my e-mail , my english skills are not too good...

    Dear Madam,Sir

    I am writing to ask about Erasmus + student exchange programme at your University.
    I was extremely interested and full of wish to spend this semester of my study course at your University, but because of some reasons I lost my chance.
    I am a student of Tbilisi state Conservatoire at the study program- Classical vocal. (I am third course student )
    I would be grateful if you gently give me some information - when will be the next call for erasmus students and if it is possible for me to take part in it or not next years , because I will be at fourth course of my study.

    Thank you in advice

    I look forward to receiving your response

    yours sincerely

    ana kherkheulidze

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    Re: would u help me to correct my e-mail , my english skills are not too good...

    Quote Originally Posted by ana kherkheulidze View Post

    Would you help correct my e-mail? My English skills are not too good...

    Dear Madam or Sir:

    I am writing to ask about the Erasmus+ student exchange programme at your university. [Capitalize proper nouns, not common nouns.]
    I am extremely interested, and wished to spend this semester at your university, but because of some reasons I lost my chance.
    I am a student of Tbilisi State Conservatoire [Capitalize proper nouns] at the study program- classical vocal. [This phrase is wrong. Can you explain what you're trying to say? Are you studying singing?] I am third course student.
    I would be grateful if you would give me some information. When will be the next call for Erasmus+ students happen? Is it is possible for me to take part in it next year? I will be at fourth course of my study. [This is also wrong. What is a fourth course of study?]

    Thank you. I look forward to receiving your response.

    Yours sincerely,

    Ana Kherkheulidze
    Hi, Ana!

    I hope that helps. I'm not sure what "study program - classical vocal" and "fourth course of study" mean:

    - Are you studying classical vocal singing?

    - Are you in your fourth year?
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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