[Grammar] would u help me to correct my e-mail , my english skills are not too good...

[ana kherkheulidze]

Dear Madam,Sir

I am writing to ask about Erasmus + student exchange programme at your University.
I was extremely interested and full of wish to spend this semester of my study course at your University, but because of some reasons I lost my chance.
I am a student of Tbilisi state Conservatoire at the study program- Classical vocal. (I am third course student )
I would be grateful if you gently give me some information - when will be the next call for erasmus students and if it is possible for me to take part in it or not next years , because I will be at fourth course of my study.

Thank you in advice

I look forward to receiving your response

yours sincerely

ana kherkheulidze

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Would you help correct my e-mail? My English skills are not too good...

Dear Madam or Sir:

I am writing to ask about the Erasmus+ student exchange programme at your university. [Capitalize proper nouns, not common nouns.]
I am extremely interested, and wished to spend this semester at your university, but because of some reasons I lost my chance.
I am a student of Tbilisi State Conservatoire [Capitalize proper nouns] at the study program- classical vocal. [This phrase is wrong. Can you explain what you're trying to say? Are you studying singing?] I am third course student.
I would be grateful if you would give me some information. When will be the next call for Erasmus+ students happen? Is it is possible for me to take part in it next year? I will be at fourth course of my study. [This is also wrong. What is a fourth course of study?]

Thank you. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours sincerely,

Ana Kherkheulidze

Hi, Ana!

I hope that helps. I'm not sure what "study program - classical vocal" and "fourth course of study" mean:

- Are you studying classical vocal singing?

- Are you in your fourth year?