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    Short communication

    Dear all,

    I want to inform to a group of participants that their schedule sessions have been changed.

    This is my version, anyone could help?

    thank you!



    Dear participants,


    Due to the large number of submissions, we have been forced to introduce some changes in the stand-by time sessions.



    Please check your session by clicking on the next link:



    Sincerely,
    The committee.

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    Re: Short communication

    Dear all,

    I want to inform to a group of participants that their scheduled sessions have been changed.

    This is my version. Can anyone help?

    Thank you!

    ----------------------------

    Dear participants:


    Due to the large number of submissions, we have been forced to make some changes in the ​session schedule.



    Please check your session by clicking on ​this link:

    ​[You can also say: "Please check your session here:]

    Sincerely,

    ​[Skip a line.]

    The committee. ​[1: Use a person's name, not the name of a group. You may put the person's title on the next line. 2: We do not put a period (a full stop) here.

    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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