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    revision to the draft announcement to stakeholders in need

    Hello,
    I am writing an draft announcement to inform stakeholders of the company and advise procedures involved. Would appreciate your revision as a NES. Thank you in advance.

    We encourage internal staffs or third party individuals to report any unethical and dishonest conducts.

    As a stakeholder of the company, if you would like to report any immoral or dishonest conducts, please send an email with your actual name, descriptive details about the incident reported, supporting evidence, and your contact information provided.

    The auditing department at company XYZ will verify the reported incident, and deliver an unbiased arbitration or resolution.

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    Re: revision to the draft announcement to stakeholders in need

    Say:

    I am writing an announcement to tell the stakeholders something.

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    Re: revision to the draft announcement to stakeholders in need

    Two things.

    1. The more complicated you make things the more likely you are to confuse people.

    2. We already did this one. Once should be enough.

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    Re: revision to the draft announcement to stakeholders in need

    Please remember that "conduct" is not a count noun.

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