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    #1

    skip going to an actual mall

    How often do you go shopping?
    Actually I go shopping twice a week to save my money. But sometimes, I drop by the mall when it comes a new product or on sale.
    * I drop by the mall when a new product comes out or some product is on sale.
    (Sometimes when some product is cheaper on an online shopping mall, I skip going to an actual mall to do shopping in there)
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    If an error is found in the underlined, please let me know.
    Last edited by keannu; 06-May-2016 at 15:08.

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    #2

    Re: skip going to an actual mall

    You omitted the space that's required before an open-parenthesis character. Do you read the replies I write to you?

    I don't know which sentence you're asking about. They all have grammatical errors and are more or less unnatural.
    I am not a teacher.

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    #3

    Re: skip going to an actual mall

    Is this correction correct?
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    Sometimes when some product is cheaper on an online shopping mall, I skip going to an actual mall to do shopping in there.
    =>Sometimes when some product comes out cheaper on an online shopping mall, I shop there instead of going to a shopping mall.

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    #4

    Re: skip going to an actual mall

    Does "comes out cheaper" sound unnatural?
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    Sometimes when some product comes out cheaper on an online shopping mall, I shop there instead of going to a shopping mall.

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