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    I can share (travel experience/memories of travel)

    I traveled alone or with friends. I prefer to travel with my friend. Bacause, after finishing travel with my friend, I can share traveling with friends. My favorite destination is Niagara Falls in Canada.
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    I can share (travel experience/memories of travel) with friends.

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    Re: I can share (travel experience/memories of travel)

    Quote Originally Posted by keannu View Post
    I traveled alone or with friends. I prefer to travel with my friends (no full stop here) because, after finishing travelling with my friends I can share traveling my experiences with other friends. My favorite destination is Niagara Falls in Canada.
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    See my corrections and suggestions above.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: I can share (travel experience/memories of travel)

    There's just one L in traveling​ in AmE.
    I am not a teacher.

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