Please see my corrections above. It is important to follow these rules of written English at all times:
- Start every sentence with a capital letter.
- End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark.
- Always capitalise the word "I".
As well as not following those rules, there are multiple spelling errors in your paragraphs. Does your computer have a spellcheck? If so, it should have underlined certain words in red. Those words contain errors. See if you can find them.
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