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    please check the text

    Hello

    Could you check the text?

    Therefore, in order that the shortage of supporting staff such as sport medicine physician, nutritionist and the like with the relevant university degrees does not preclude/hinder the purpose when the project starts, we need to hire new staff in advance.

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    Re: please check the text

    Say:

    In order that a shortage of supporting staff such as sports medicine physician, nutritionist, and the like (with the relevant university degrees) does not prevent the project from starting, we need to hire new staff in advance.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 13-May-2016 at 02:23.

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    #3

    Re: please check the text

    Could you check the following text, too?

    Therefore, in order that shortage / lack of (sufficient) backing up / supportive forces such as athletic doctors and also nutritionists with related / corresponding educational field(s) would not prevent / hinder this achievement / would not hinder achieving / accomplishing this important objective / goal...................

    Many thanks

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    #4

    Re: please check the text

    Despite its length, that is not a complete sentence.

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    #5

    Re: please check the text

    Perhaps you want to say something like:

    We don't want the lack of these things (sports doctors, nutritionists, etc.) to prevent us from reaching our goals.
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 18-May-2016 at 22:54. Reason: Added missing word

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