I am too busy to enjoy Romeo and Juliet, the drama I was asked by Mr. Liu, so I need someone who has read it to tell me what it is about.
The above sentence is quoted from a test. Is it acceptable?
Last edited by sitifan; 12-May-2016 at 10:11.
I need native speakers' help.
It is not correct. It should be something like:
I am too busy to read Romeo and Juliet, the play Mr Liu asked me to read, and so I need someone who has read it to tell me what it is about.
If you must have a passive, then the underlined part can be 'the play I was aked by Mr Liu to read'.