[Grammar] Todd takes the incandescent light and aims it directly into Jim's eyes

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Nikitus

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Hello

Is the following sentence grammatically correct?

"Todd takes the incandescent light and aims it directly into Jim's eyes."

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What do you mean by "incandescent light"? Why not just use "light" or "torch" or similar?
 

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Dear emsr2d2:

First of all, thanks for your answer.

I want to refer to a special bright (red, blue, or green) light for theatrical plays or shows, which is capable of partially blind a person if pointed directly. Although no permanent effects on vision of the person to whom it is aimed.

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It doesn't sound right. An incandescent light radiates in all directions, unless it is confined within some apparatus (like a torch, as ems says). How about calling it a stage light?
 

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That could be a spotlight. I've had a stage spotlight aimed straight in my face once or twice and I couldn't see a thing!
 
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