Student or Learner
Would you please correct my mistakes in the following sentence? I am wondering if my sentence sounds natural.
Whenever Anna went to Social Welfare Office to beg for help, she felt like dirt being flushed down a sink.
I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.
Also note that if the office's name is "Social Welfare", you should write Social Welfare office.
I am not a teacher.
Whether it's capitalised or not, it needs an article before it.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.