Student or Learner
These days, the number of young people taking drugs is on the increase.,,,,,Watching scenes where entertainers who are their object of envy take drugs, young people come to have a fantasy.
1. I'm not sure if this is correct. It means "entertainers who ordinary people respect, love, to be like".
entertainers who are their object of envy take
2. Is "fantasy" a proper term? You'd like to imitate entertainers' actions by imagining a pleasurable moment.
I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.