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    Could someone help me to correct this text?

    Hi everyone,
    It's a fake text, and to most important thing for me in that is grammar, which I would like to correct. Can you help me?

    "My name is Jake, I am a Pole, I come from Poland. I live in the south of the country in the province of Silesia in Katowice.
    2 years ago I graduated from the Technical University. My direction was an IT.
    In every summer I worked in a company that dealt with the cleaning of turbin oil systems in many power plants in Poland. As a fitter.
    After graduation I went hitchhiking to explore a bit of the world. I moonlighted in various countries by performing a simple physical work. Gathering grapes in France, or like a warehouse worker in the Netherlands. From those countries which I visited Thailand, Armenia, Georgia and Turkey were the best.
    I love Thai food. The most hospitable people are the people of Armenia and Turkey."

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    #2

    Re: Could someone help me to correct this text?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuba89 View Post
    Hi everyone,
    It's This is a fake text, and to but the most important thing for me in that it is grammar, which I would like to correct. Can you help me?

    "My name is Jake, I am a Pole, and I come from Poland. I live in the south of the country, in the Katowice which is in the province of Silesia. in Katowice.
    Two years ago, I graduated from the Technical University. My direction major was an in IT.

    In every For the past few summers, I worked as a fitter in a company that deals with the cleaning of turbine oil systems in many power plants in Poland. As a fitter.

    After I graduated, graduation I went hitchhiking to explore a bit of the world. I moonlighted worked in various countries by performing simple physical jobs such as work. Gathering picking grapes in France, or like as a warehouse worker in the Netherlands. From Out of those countries which I visited, Thailand, Armenia, Georgia and Turkey were the best.
    I love Thai food. The most hospitable people are were the people of Armenia and Turkey.
    .

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    #3

    Re: Could someone help me to correct this text?

    It's not a fake text. It's a genuine text with a lot of errors.

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    Re: Could someone help me to correct this text?

    Thank you, teechar :)

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