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    Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

    For most patients, application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle leads to relieve symptoms without need for any additional therapy.

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    Re: Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

    For most patients, the application of PEMF in the second stage of menstrual cycle leads helps to relieve symptoms without the need for any additional therapy.
    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

    In addition to tedmc's suggestions above, I would say "their/the menstrual cycle."

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    Re: Dear friends, can anybody help me correct this sentence?

    I would say "tends" (to relieve symptoms) instead of "helps" (to relieve symptoms).

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