Student or Learner
I am wondering if me sentence sounds natural. Would you please correct my mistakes?
As the fat man spoke, layers of his flesh on his ruddy face shook with anger.
I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.