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    #21

    Re: Writing about nuclear power

    Quote Originally Posted by Zhao Qingyu View Post

    Taking both sides into consideration, nuclear power is a double-edged sword. As long as human could precisely build and use nuclear station, the productive resource is feasible. Besides, scientists should not stop finding new energy and should decrease their dependency on nuclear power.
    You seem to have mastered the art of saying something without really saying anything. That paragraph is a good example of that. In the first sentence you say that nuclear energy is a double-edged sword. The logical question is: "Okay, but what do you mean by that?" Instead of offering an explanation, you move on to the next sentence, which seems to say something, but it doesn't really say anything. And so it goes until the end.
    Last edited by Tarheel; 01-Jun-2016 at 18:17. Reason: Insert question mark

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    #22

    Re: Writing about nuclear power

    Let's look at the last sentence. Try:

    Scientists should keep looking for new energy sources, and we should reduce our dependency on nuclear power.

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    #23

    Re: Writing about nuclear power

    Yeah..I need to be logic and add more substantial texts.. Thanks~

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