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    Please help me with checking the text

    Hello

    Would you Please help me with checking the text?


    I would kindly advise you that as for the analyses, I found measuring the concentration of potentially toxic elements very helpful to proceed with my project.

    Thank you so much in advance for you assistance and kindness. I am very much grateful for your time and attention.

    Best regards

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    Re: Please help me with checking the text

    For a start, "I would kindly advise you" is very unnatural, in BrE at least.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please help me with checking the text

    Quote Originally Posted by majid72 View Post
    Hello


    Thank you so much in advance for you assistance and kindness. I am very much grateful for your time and attention.

    Best regards
    What are you asking the person to do? You don't make a request.

    You can use one or the other, but using both is a bit excessive.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Please help me with checking the text

    How about With the analyses, I found that measuring...? There's plenty of gratitude at the end, so stating the facts simply is enough for me.

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