Please help me with checking the text

[majid72]

Hello

Would you Please help me with checking the text?


I would kindly advise you that as for the analyses, I found measuring the concentration of potentially toxic elements very helpful to proceed with my project.

Thank you so much in advance for you assistance and kindness. I am very much grateful for your time and attention.

Best regards

 

[emsr2d2]

For a start, "I would kindly advise you" is very unnatural, in BrE at least.

 

[Barb_D]

Hello


Thank you so much in advance for you assistance and kindness. I am very much grateful for your time and attention.

Best regards

What are you asking the person to do? You don't make a request.

You can use one or the other, but using both is a bit excessive.

 

[Tdol]

How about With the analyses, I found that measuring...? There's plenty of gratitude at the end, so stating the facts simply is enough for me.