Zhao Qingyu
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Could you please correct this writing for me? Thanks~
( PS: First paragraph is the writing task. )
Some people think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than humans. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
We have been carried on computer revolution for many years, with computer intelligence growing by leaps and bounce, there is a significant possibility that computers will be more intelligent than human being in near future. The computer development has became a controversial topic in terms of its effects on people.
Proponents of computer development point out that computer intelligence has permeated every aspect of people’s life, which has obvious advantages to society. First of all, computer development created a large dollop of economic value to society due to easy-control computer programs, which saved labor cost and facilitated work efficiency. What is more, with computer programs, people could take advantage of efficacious machine to complete tough and dangerous works for human. A case in point is glass-wall cleaning robot system for high-rise buildings. Last but not least, computer intelligence has made people’s life various and convenient, without computer science, people would not enjoy the joy of using cell phone , airplane and so on.
On the contrary, opponents look at sharp development of computer in another visual angle. Thinking of the ability and potential value of computer intelligence, they worry that it will cause several disadvantages as below: First, it will cause a hundreds and thousands of people lose their job and then cause social turbulence; Second, it can be used by criminals to blackmail website or made illegal objects; Third, artificial intelligence system might out of people’s control, and then threaten lives and society.
Both sides make sense, computer intelligence is a double-edged sword. During its development, there must have unpleasant results like soaring unemployment rate and internet insecure. While every transform have pros and cons, as long as we take measures to minimize the side effect of computer intelligence, we can use it to pave a better way for the future. All in all, the development of computer science is excellent opportunity and challenge for human, we should embrace the opportunity and face the challenge in the meanwhile.
( PS: First paragraph is the writing task. )
Some people think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than humans. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
We have been carried on computer revolution for many years, with computer intelligence growing by leaps and bounce, there is a significant possibility that computers will be more intelligent than human being in near future. The computer development has became a controversial topic in terms of its effects on people.
Proponents of computer development point out that computer intelligence has permeated every aspect of people’s life, which has obvious advantages to society. First of all, computer development created a large dollop of economic value to society due to easy-control computer programs, which saved labor cost and facilitated work efficiency. What is more, with computer programs, people could take advantage of efficacious machine to complete tough and dangerous works for human. A case in point is glass-wall cleaning robot system for high-rise buildings. Last but not least, computer intelligence has made people’s life various and convenient, without computer science, people would not enjoy the joy of using cell phone , airplane and so on.
On the contrary, opponents look at sharp development of computer in another visual angle. Thinking of the ability and potential value of computer intelligence, they worry that it will cause several disadvantages as below: First, it will cause a hundreds and thousands of people lose their job and then cause social turbulence; Second, it can be used by criminals to blackmail website or made illegal objects; Third, artificial intelligence system might out of people’s control, and then threaten lives and society.
Both sides make sense, computer intelligence is a double-edged sword. During its development, there must have unpleasant results like soaring unemployment rate and internet insecure. While every transform have pros and cons, as long as we take measures to minimize the side effect of computer intelligence, we can use it to pave a better way for the future. All in all, the development of computer science is excellent opportunity and challenge for human, we should embrace the opportunity and face the challenge in the meanwhile.
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