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    please kindly correct my answer to research experience

    My Master thesis project was about xxx.
    I worked on my thesis project because of several reasons. My tutor worked on genes involve in special types of xxx diseases such as xxx and xxx but among them xxx not only in our lab but also in my country was not studied. At the moment there were a few global studies and we aimed to compare our result with them hoping to get a conclusion. I was the only one in our lab who worked on xxx therefore I have done all parts myself under supervision of my supervisor. I collected xxx and xxx samples from a children hospital by contacting directly with parents and patients and based on their satisfaction. Although as I mentioned before this was not my favorite field of study, yet I learned a lot. How to deal with several challenges as it was my first research experience. How to convince parents that this investigation will be helpful for future generations which was the most difficult part of my work, how to present my results weekly and monthly. When there were no bands or several bands on the gel, I learned to find out my mistakes by going back and repeat all steps in my mind or searching on net to learn how to solve it by using others experience and share mine as well. xxx, xxx, xxx and xxx were some of main techniques I used. During work on xxx I also worked on xxx by using the same techniques. I also worked on xxx in a lab for a few months. Our animal models were rat and mouse and as a result I am expert in xxx and xxx methods.

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    Re: please kindly correct my answer to research experience

    I do not know what xxx is or why it is supposed to be a mystery.

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    I am pretty sure it's "master's thesis".

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    That should be at least two and probably three paragraphs. (Space between paragraphs.) However, please do not change the original post.

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    Say:

    I worked on my thesis project for several reasons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tarheel View Post
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    I worked on my thesis project for several reasons.
    Whenever you say something like that you need to state what the reasons are.

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    Say:

    My tutor worked on genes involved in....

    (I am unclear about why you can't mention the diseases studied. Is it a secret for some reason?)

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    What are global studies?

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    If you are going to mention something that you did not study you need to explain why. After all, there is usually no reason to mention what you are not studying.

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    hi
    thank you so much. to be honest the article related to my thesis has the same name and has not been published yet that's why i did not mention the name of my thesis project and the disease as well.i will send it again with less xxx!and hope it seems better this time.
    the reasons are my tutor suggestion and lack of facility that i have mentioned in motivation letter and did not repeat it here but you are right i should remove that sentence. By global studies i mean the research has been done about this disease around the world. the PhD position i like to apply for is not related to my previous research and i really like to do that that's why i emphasis the previous research was not my favorite but again i think that's right and it's better i don't say that .


    My Master thesis project was about Gene polymorphism in an autoimmune disease.
    I worked on my thesis project for several reasons. My tutor worked on genes involve in special types of autoimmune diseases such as Lupus and JIA but among them xxx not only in our lab but also in my country was not studied. At the moment there were a few global studies and we aimed to compare our result with them hoping to get a conclusion.
    I was the only one in our lab who worked on this disease therefore I have done all parts myself under supervision of my supervisor. I collected blood and saliva samples from a children hospital by contacting directly with parents and patients and based on their satisfaction. Although as I mentioned before this was not my favorite field of study, yet I learned a lot. How to deal with several challenges as it was my first research experience. How to convince parents that this investigation will be helpful for future generations which was the most difficult part of my work, how to present my results weekly and monthly. When there were no bands or several bands on the gel, I learned to find out my mistakes by going back and repeat all steps in my mind or searching on net to learn how to solve it by using others experience and share mine as well. DNA extraction, SSP-PCR, primer design and electrophoresis agarose gel.
    During work on (the disease) I also worked on (another gene) by using the same techniques. I also worked on Hair follicle stem cell in a lab for a few months. Our animal models were rat and mouse and as a result I am expert in RNA extraction and animal cell culture methods.

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